pitch reflection

 1) In regard to how well I carried out and applied my audience and product research, I would say that this was done successfully due to the fact that I aimed at linking my audience research to the storyline of my advert this was done in order to make my advert more appealing to the set target audience for my advert this was to gain the attention in response to something that they would feel that they could be able to relate to in this case it was in regards to a student who was struggling to revise for their exam that they had coming up which would be appealing to a younger target audience which was stated in my presentation. However, in regard to product research I do believe that I could have expanded further in terms of why I decided to go with the 'Twirl' bar rather than another chocolate bar, which is something to take into consideration.

2) When it came to presenting my proposal, I feel that my voice was loud and clear which was good for my presentation as well as the audience as they were able to hear me clearly this meant that I was able to send my message out well to the audience. On the other hand, I feel that I did speed through it which was likely due to the fact I was a bit nervous whilst presenting but my voice was clear and do believe that I was able to effectively get my points across to the audience when delivering my presentation.

3) In terms of improvements that I feel should be made to my pitch, there are some areas that I would say require improvement upon these primarily being content, research and presentation.  

For the improvements regarding the content the way that this could be improved upon would be to add detail to actually providing information to how I will be ensuring that the audience is aware that the effects of the chocolate is only shown and stated for advertising purposes and should not be taken seriously when purchasing the product therefore I feel I should add a disclaimer in order to avoid any accusations being made against Cadburys and their product. Another improvement would be to potentially add a slogan for the 'Twirl' bar this would help with recognition of the product and would help with trying to sell the product.

When it comes to the research the improvements that should be made to this would be providing more information regarding the twirl bar itself as it was the sole product being shown in the proposal in a way that would gain the interest of the audience so this could be by describing how the chocolate is made in a way to encourage the audience to purchase the chocolate bar.

In regards to the presentation itself I feel that the way this could improved upon would be my approach to this task of actually presenting the proposal on in front of an audience on camera this is because I feel that I was quite quick when it came to talking about my idea for my adverts and talking about the other relevant topics of the proposal itself so I feel that this is something I could improve upon the next time I am presenting, another improvement would be the fact that I did tend to look at the board often at times so this is another issue I feel could be worked around.