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First draft of pitch

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pitch video

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       https://youtu.be/iPI11mrUTnc

Pitch questions video

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WLgfKgXpGRgvA-xNBqyXW-KSPufMvSKq/view?usp=drive_link

Evaluation

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response to the audience feedback print advert

 For my print advert I gathered an audience to answer a number of questions relating their overall thoughts about my print advert. For question 1 (what do you feel is a strength about my print advert?) the audience felt that the overall message was clear to understand which is a positive about my advert and something that was done effectively. For question 2 (what improvements do you feel could be made to my print advert?) the audience feel that there should be images added to the print advert this is so that its eye-catching and more engaging for the audience. For question 3 ( do you think that there could be anything that could be added to my print advert?) the audience want  more information to be added to the print advert so that its filled up and has a lot of text implemented. For question 4 (what are your overall thoughts about my print advert?) the audience have said that it is clear and is easy to understand however there should be more relevant information and images ...

audience feedback print advert questions

person 1 1) what do you feel is a strength about my print advert?  the message of the print advert is clear and slogan is good 2) what improvements do you feel could be made to my print advert? change the font of the text for the title 3) do you think that there could be anything that could be added to my print advert  add images of the twirl itself 4) what are your overall thoughts about my print advert? very clear and understandable, add more images. person 2 1) what do you feel is a strength about my print advert?  easy to understand, clear use of images 2) what improvements do you feel could be made to my print advert? maybe use more images to make it more eye catching 3) do you think that there could be anything that could be added to my print advert  have more information about the Twirl added 4) what are your overall thoughts about my print advert? overall, i feel that there should be more information added to the advert as well as images relating to the produ...

final version of print advert

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draft version print advert

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Response to audience feedback radio advert

 For my print advert I asked a number of people for feedback on their thoughts of my radio by asking a number of questions based on my radio advert. For question 1 (what did you like about my advert?) people found the narrative of the  advert easy to understand which made the story line clear. For question 2 (what improvements could be made to my radio advert based on what you have listened to?)  the audio seemed to be the main issue that the audience faced as there was interference due to background noise during the advert. For question 3 (Is there anything you think should be added or taken away from my radio advert? if so, explain) the common response to this was that the audience wish to have sound effects added to the radio advert and to get rid of the background noise that affected the radio advert. For question 4 ( what are your overall thoughts about my radio advert?) overall the audience feel that the advert is engaging however the main issue was that there was ...