person 1 1) what did you like about my radio advert? The radio adverts narrative was clear to understand 2) what improvements could be made to my radio advert based on what you have listened to? Inconsistent audio within the advertisement as well as lack of any other sound effects. 3) Is there anything you think should be added or taken away from my radio advert? if so, explain Add in additional sound effects as well as take away unwanted noise from audio. 4) what are your overall thoughts about my radio advert? Needs other audio to make the advertisement sound better as well as cleaning up the unwanted noise though there is clear narrative. person 2 1) what did you like about my radio advert? The advertisement has a clear message in what it is trying to do. 2) what improvements could be made to my radio advert based on what you have listened to? Removing the unwanted background noise and adding other sounds to advertisement 3) Is there anything you think should be add...