Response to audience feedback radio advert

 For my print advert I asked a number of people for feedback on their thoughts of my radio by asking a number of questions based on my radio advert. For question 1 (what did you like about my advert?) people found the narrative of the  advert easy to understand which made the story line clear. For question 2 (what improvements could be made to my radio advert based on what you have listened to?)  the audio seemed to be the main issue that the audience faced as there was interference due to background noise during the advert. For question 3 (Is there anything you think should be added or taken away from my radio advert? if so, explain) the common response to this was that the audience wish to have sound effects added to the radio advert and to get rid of the background noise that affected the radio advert. For question 4 ( what are your overall thoughts about my radio advert?) overall the audience feel that the advert is engaging however the main issue was that there was problems regarding the background noise. I will use these responses to perfect my final version, I will have to mainly focus on fixing the issue regarding the sound which may require re-recording.