first draft of script

Fade in:

We see a student named Tom, sitting at his desk surrounded by books and notes. He looks worried and stressed, his eyes glued to his notes, trying to understand anything he has spent the past couple of days noting down.

Steve 

(Muttering to himself) “I’m never going to pass this exam”.

Just then, his friend enters the room and tosses a Cadbury Twirl bar onto his desk.

Friend

Bro, take a break. You need to relax.

Steve

I can’t relax! I have an exam tomorrow and I can’t understand anything that I have written.

Friend

Have a Twirl. It’ll help you concentrate

Tom hesitates at first before unwrapping the chocolate bar. He takes a bite and his eyes suddenly burst open.

Steve 

(Amazed) This is crazy! I understand everything now!

He then dives back into his notes and books, flipping pages and typing furiously on his keyboard. The clock on the wall ticks away, but time is irrelevant to tom.

Cut to:

The next day, Tom is walking out of the exam confident and satisfied. He then spots his friend and catches up to him.

Steve 

Bro thanks for the Twirl, it definitely helped me

Friend

No problem, did you pass?

Steve 

I aced it, I even got the highest mark!

Friend

(impressed) that Twirl really helped you out didn’t it?

Tom

Yeah, It’s like it gave me superpowers or something.

Cut to:

The Cadbury Twirl logo appears.

Announcer

Cadbury Twirl. The chocolate that twirls your way to success

Fade out.

 

 

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